Looking at the Moon

Looking at the Moon

A Poem by The Invisible Girl

Sometimes I sit alone watching the moon
Thinking about how he'll come real soon

He may not be near
And I know I shed some tears

Because it seems like everybody's got somebody but me...

Lovers saying "I love you"
But all I get are the blues

Waiting for him gets so lonely
But I know he's my one and only

Couples holding hand in the parking lot
Boy, I feel like a twisted knot

It is getting cold outside
I just need him by my side

I hope he looks at the moon
Praying he'll get to me real soon

He may not have found me yet
But he maybe closer I bet

Because everybody's got their somebody like me.

© 2014 The Invisible Girl


Author's Note

The Invisible Girl
Ehh.. Again it is not that good...cuz i tried to make it rhyme while making sense.. Lol..

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It makes sense and the rhyming is great trust me :)
I loved this write. It really did rhyme well and at the same time it has great meaning to it.
This is filled with hope and want and belief i like that.
I waited for mine for ages lol... they take there time don't they haha.
Hopefully hes worth the wait.
Beautiful piece :) well written :)


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