Prison

A Poem by Luke

Random haiku...make your own translation

The door slams loudly,

Shutting out your hopes and dreams.

Soon, we'll meet again.

© 2008 Luke

Author's Note

Constructive criticism always welcome!

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Deborah Leah Krempa

I thought it was well written. Thank you for sharing. Debileah

Posted 15 Years Ago

Aimee Mahathy

Hmm... what I gather is maybe it's from the point of view of Opportunity? Like, the person ruined their chances, but they'll get one again? I don't know, maybe I'm reading too much into it. lol, I tend to do that.
Delightful though!

Posted 15 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

Something along those lines, yea. Sorry this is 4 years later, lol. You can't ever read too much i.. read more

11 Years Ago

well, precisely what it says anyway.

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Added on December 20, 2008

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Luke

Providence, RI

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