Curiosity

Curiosity 

this got the young boy killed.

it got that unprotected man ill.

this had gotten you to reach your full potential 

it made you realize what are lifes essential 

this made you realize that world isn't there for you

it made you think that no matter how red or how healthy your heart is 

   there is always space for ... blue

this made you tattoo it in your brain to never do it again

it got you neglecting everything negative including friends 

this got me winning millions of dollars of the lottery 

it got my attention & it was from the honest me

this got me thinking and on idle 

it got my emotions dialogue on recital 

this got the person discovering a new other side 

it has you on the passenger side , while the car asks

   "Are you ready to drive?"

this got a girl with huge whole in her heart

it got this world ruined from the start

it got this world so easy on hiding the truth 

this happens because we refused . get amused

                    and get duped! 

Now you know

Reviews

[Talal Hussain]

nice effort man ...keep up the good work

[Chloe]

There are a few grammatical errors, however, this is a great write. Your stanzas each describe a different aspect and point of view from which curiosity gives you. Nice job. :)

[Xerclipse]

curiosity killed the cat. Sorry had to say that.

Other than that it is a pretty great poem. No flaws I saw. Mistakes shouldn't be repeated but it can be done once to learn from. Keep it up