Life as of now

Life itself is just abstract 

You have to leave the past but refer back 

to keep intact 

Every day you gain a few pieces 

to enhance your body , soul and thesis 

Seems like there's more downs than ups 

but it makes you the person you want to be

you can either indulge what this world offers 

or be your own coach , your own shot caller 

We learn such emotions like love & grief

Pain and love, Mud and glass.

Like the time I got hurt years back 

Oh man, there I go referring to the past  

I have to learn from the past 

but also burn away from my past

The future is always on its way 

so I won't be worried with that

I need to worry about right now 

because it won't come back 

Reviews

[Destiny Nicole]

Very nice, good work. Make it a little longer. Add to it. It seems like you have more to say. so say it. :)

[Mary Christabel George]

"Seems like there's more downs than ups
but it makes you the person you want to be"

These are my favorite lines...

A beautiful message conveyed - Don't worry about past as it is already gone. Don't worry about future because it is yet to come. Live in the present because it is to be lived just now.

[Coyote Poetry]

"Every day you gain a few pieces
to enhance your body , soul and thesis"
Very good wisdom in the poem. We are responsible for our actions. Better to learn from the past and walk softly into the future. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[CRZ]

Thank you, you just gave me some wise words. Thanks

[Maxine]

Lovely! :) Your style almost reminds me of music, and the themes of the poems are beautiful. They're deep and powerful, and you bring the emotion out very well. The overall flow is also very good