Rain

Oh Rain Oh Rain, when will we meet again

As the drops of rain fall down on my window

As the little dots of cloudburst come trickling down on the glass

I can sleep peacefully. The drops of rain is a treaty to keeps bane from going insane

Oh my God, now I may never get a nap. Is raining cats and dogs , dogs and cats.

It's smooth drizzle is washing away my problems. The stronger the rain, the stronger the freedom.

Feels like a sprinkler of alcohol being poured on open cut. My heart is open cup flooded 

                                but

Rain represents two sides.

Rain represents two sides.

                                                                                  the bad, the ugly

                                                                                  the good, the beautiful

Clouds can represent

 a town or a town full of crowns 

   Drizzle can represent

    a simmer down situation or a stressful occupation

      Lighting can represent  

        a dark place that's near or a certain spark that's here

          Water can represent

            a taste of a purity win or a sense of a obscurity sin

 

Oh Rain Oh Rain , nice to meet you again 

Author's Note

"Oh Rain Oh Rain, when will we meet again"
- pronounce "again" as a-Gain

Reviews

[Kristin Lee]

Very unique. The rhythm is very broken - but the rain doesn't have a steady rhythm and you talk about the rain changing pace so it works. I like how you talk about the rain having two sides and then from that point everything has two meanings. The display is cool, like a cup running over. Over all, very unique. Good job.

[Effie Ray]

You have a very unique style, this poem is deep - it makes you think. Very good.

[Haley Harrigan]

Extraordinary. I love the rain very much, and find it a comfort and delight (one side). While others may find it as a terrible storm and disaster waiting for the destruction of us all (another side).

[dw817]

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Rain is supposed to wash away all the mud and grime in the world, Jason. It's a good thing. Rain also releases negative ions which in turn give positive vibes to us, increased endorphins (what makes us feel good).

I sleep remarkably well and deep in rainstorms. The thunder is just the distant echoes of our mind, and the rain the scattered thoughts and torrential emotions that flood them every day. It is no different. :)

[buffalosoldier96]

very interesting style and very much like the prose of the poem aswell. almost philosohical in the content. thumbs up

[carol burgess romance]

interesting read and like your style

[Onku Ghosh]

Yo have captured the essence of he rain very well. Sometimes it can be a boon and so, very welcoming.....or it can just be a nuisance "Rain represents two sides/the bad,the ugly/the good,the beautiful ''
WEll done!!!

[Angel]

Interesting musings, as we watch the rain falling...

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

Great piece on duality, nicely done.

[SteveB]

Nice use of internal rhyme here with some strong images. And I liked your use of the break, a good shift from the longer lines at the start to the shorter more thoughtful use of repetition at the end. Well penned.

[sakshi arora]

i liked the poem i just found cats and dogs,dogs and cats a little out of place but good effort