Pieces of

Stand in the mirror, couldn't see things more clearer

that all the answers are there but if I don't know which questions to ask

What does the answer even mean to me

Does it mean, I go soul searching so alone or with a herd to eventually fly off like some birds.

Do I need religion to access God

Can God even be accessed?

You mean to tell me that I need to give funds and be confined to a building to worship my maker

please, wake up. He's everywhere like the pigs quote on quote patrolling 

I'm just rolling with ideas 

Ideas soon to turn into actions and if you can't sleep at night with satisfaction

well you ain't doing enough.

I'm the youngest, being talked to by strangers and relatives. I won't be the dumbest.

I summon my permanent residence on this earth as CRZ. 

Shine like the bloodiest diamond from Sierra Leone Stevie Wonder can see. 

Wonder, How will the world be in the future.

Second thought, f**k the world. 

It's already messed up

All that is lefted is its people

I can only start with the guy standing on the reflection

These words come from a section from a man becoming a Man.

I"m on my way to my destiny where ever that may be.

It's on a journey to discover CRZ 

  

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

yes...so many pieces that seem unrelated. i think this is an honest and heartfelt write...you are facing your apprehensions and confusion rather than masquerading or escaping. i think that is half the battle of self discovering...i think religion is our attempts to access God....the surprise is that while we knock knock knock....this magnificent, loving, forgiving Creator is all the while right behind us...waiting for us to hear the whispers....of course one doesn't need a building to worship...nor to contribute to its maintenance....practicing selflessness whether to building funds or the Red Cross is something we do to enrich our own soul...these are the thoughts your poem have provoked from me...its 5 am and already i am thinking about God...and the beauty of youth ...hang in young man!
E.

[Sue]

We all start the search somewhere and we all have a different journey to complete, keep finding your own way CRZ.... good read!

[Dayran]

We all start somewhere ... it may be a dream or a fairy having a dream. But with some progress we return to put our experiences in context with the rest of society ... we find the average and create our references from there. The start is often like a no man's land. A great write CRZ ... it reaches out to touch the dream and it says its okay.

[Jamie Cook]

Sucks that no one can the world, but you can change yourself :3 which was apparent with the usage of reflection, with questions of who one is. But hey in the end if you change one mind, you've succeeded. Lovely job on the poem.

[Keith]

Ah yes, can't change the world, just start on yourself.

[It's Me, The Miracle]

A rhythmic flow of words that shows the virtual images of the mirror to reflect the reality....."I can only start with the guy standing on the reflection"...The determination in these lines are awesome....Thanks for sharing it dear friend

[Baban.A.A]

very well writen piece really. I believe being a human is the case, you have tried very much to prove, prove you have a soul to be improved, and finding God is imminent, I have to, you have to, we have to ask this question do we still need God, mine is yes always, and yours is quite clear. thanks

[Barbara Walker]

Nice reflection on your reflection! All during our lives we have so many questions. Your words reflect your intent nicely.

[wordman]

I guess we all look into that mirror and wonder what and why and where I guess a piece of god is in us all if we want him to be just enjoy life while you have it let your conc, be your guide and if god wants to talk to you you wont have any trouble hearing a good write I enjoyed reading

Ron

[Sadie Maisonet]

This.... is wonderful... The words just come one after another and flow like a stream. I like this, good job.

[SpeedyHobbit Armstrong]

The tone of confusion and world-weariness is very prominent. The speaker, an inquisitive young person, is becoming disillusioned and cynical from observing events around him. He is also uncertain about what he wants from life, hence "wherever" his destiny may be and feels slightly fatalistic. He is questioning many things in his world.