A Kiss

Slowly in the mist,
you held my hands,
looking in my eyes,
fill with love,
as you whispered,
into my ears,
soft and low,
'I love you'.

You put your arms,
around me,
and slowly bent down,
to give me,
a perfect kiss...

Author's Note

What do you think? This is only an imagination of me how a kiss should be, and I haven't even go through anything a like,so this may be no real, well, but....

Reviews

[OT]

very sweet - and just in time for Valentine's day!!

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Very pleasurable poem!

[KAREN]

I thank it is sweet and romantic!

[hannajade]

This is fantastic!! really cute!! I love how you ended it--wonderful!! :D

[HopelesslyDevoted]

AAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!! simple and yet soooooooooo CUUUUUTEE!!!

[AleeleeElaine]

This was really sweet, I enjoyed reading it :)

[Kelsie Eileen Stark]

Beautiful

[Calypso]

This is nice right before Valentines day.

[astoundinglyattractive]

you switch tenses in the stanzas (past then present) but this canbe normal in poetry and i otherwise good.

[Roxi L]

This is kind of what a kiss is i guess. Like you I have never had a real kiss so...