A Kiss

Slowly in the mist,
you held my hands,
looking in my eyes,
fill with love,
as you whispered,
into my ears,
soft and low,
'I love you'.

You put your arms,
around me,
and slowly bent down,
to give me,
a perfect kiss...

Author's Note

What do you think? This is only an imagination of me how a kiss should be, and I haven't even go through anything a like,so this may be no real, well, but....

Reviews

[Ashley Myers]

so simple, so sweet. i remember when my first boyfriend did that. it was so perfect. like picture perfect. ferris wheel and all : )

[Sunflower 20]

this is how a imagine the first kiss to be like. very romantic! i only found one mistake:

"full with love"

you could change this to 2 things:

1. full of love
or
2. filled with love

[sarah]

awww so romantic!!

[al25]

This made me smile. Great job.