Remembering You

Remembering You

A Poem by Cynthia


Remembering you...
Makes me so sick,
so sick that I regret,
to leave you...

Remembering you...
Makes me cry,
crying for the memory,
that I hold you tight.

Remembering you...
Makes me hate,
hating for who I am,
the me,
who dislikes you.

Why did I go away?

Why did I hate you before?

Why am I doing this?
Remembering you...

© 2011 Cynthia

Author's Note

I don't mean to spoil the feeling of Valentines!! Don't get me wrong, but I just can't think of something sweet now, please understand it :(

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I think everyone can really relate to this. Great job!

Posted 12 Years Ago

Nice job! This had a great flow. You did an outstanding writing this.

Posted 12 Years Ago

This is sad, but it's wonderful, seriously ._.
Great work! :D

Posted 12 Years Ago

why did u dealet your profile gurl!? u have amazeing writing! what happened?

Posted 12 Years Ago

I know the feeling lol. I think I spent Valentine's with a pokerface.

But anyway, the poem is nicely done.

Posted 12 Years Ago

Written from the heart. The best place to get real feelings. You did a fab job hon on this..

Mags xx

Posted 12 Years Ago

Beautiful!! I love this poem!! =D Love the flow... love the feelings expressed here. Ha, and no worries. i think this is fine. Valentines has 2 sides anyway... all of the lovey dovey... lol.. and the other side which is sadistic, angry/hate, and just the negative feelings... of love.. i really like this poem though. I can relate to it. Memories of love can be painful or peaceful, how ever it ended for someone. Good job!

Posted 12 Years Ago

U are a really gifted poetess Cynthia 3 cheers for this poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago

Cynthia, you've done a fantastic job in this poem! I like this piece of poem although it is a bit heart-breaking to me.

Posted 12 Years Ago

i loved this amazing job :)

Posted 12 Years Ago

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Added on February 13, 2011
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