Dripping in

a simple poem i wanted to see if i could do it

Waiting for the time to drip away 

So that there may be nothing left that my mind can say

Dripping in is a dream, taken from the world unseen

  A smile deep within, deeply gleaming 

Words, a followed heart, filled with meaning

A wanting carried out, washing away all doubt

A soul soul splashing the page

Parts lefts, parts gained

A world formed 

My soul remained 

Immortalized 

within the page.

Reviews

[heylel]

!!! Beautiful, once again! This poem carries so much emotion and warmth. From the very first line I was captured, and the layout helps to emphasise the emotion even more. Thank you, once again, for sharing! I love this

[TheAimlessWanderer]

Thank you as much i am not feeling of warmth within right now i feel slightly warmer and mind slightly less muddled after this comment i can feel everyone's words bringing back a bit of emotion in me.
glad you thought it was beautiful thanks for reading.

[Spacebar Clicker]

I must say this is a very nice thing to write.It invoked emotion in me. I loved when you wrote, 'A WANTING CARRIED OUT, WASHING AWAY ALL DOUBT A SOUL SPLASHING THE PAGE.''

[TheAimlessWanderer]

I am glad to hear that you enjoy this i never thought even one person would feel anything from this let alone 2 this means a lot to me thank you.

[Spacebar Clicker]

you are welcome you could read what I wrote I am not sure about it though lol

[Sapientiam]

This was very beautiful...! I loved the last two lines at the end, even though I don't understand why. They were so intriguing, and that goes for the rest of the poem. This was well written and injected with such deep, sensuous emotions. Well done!

[TheAimlessWanderer]

Thank you this comment really cheered me up !! :) i i am not the best at expressing emotions as person outside of writing, So when some one says they can feel deep sensuous emotions from something i write. To me that is akin to them saying they can feel me deeply on emotional level which is a very special thing for me as someone who can't connect.
Thank you for this lovely comment calling it beautiful and intriguing i honestly never thought i could evoke such feelings with this.

[Sapientiam]

Well, you shouldn't doubt yourself. You are very talented and worthy of praise. I can only truly express myself through written words since I have difficulties speaking out, so I can understand. I think you can connect because this poem was something that I could link to. I'm glad I cheered you up!