A Poem by Daisy123

Hope wraps her arms around you

Even when tragedy walks by

 She comforts you in your darkest hour

When you've hit rock bottom

And are drowning in a sea of sadness

She's just like a lifeguard

Bringing you back to the surface

 When you are absolutely helpless

 Her comforting nature

 Will bring you inner peace

 And the strength to hold on

 She is a loyal friend

Always there

And always on your side

© 2010 Daisy123

Author's Note

Something I had to write for english class:)

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A very optimistic write personifying hope as it is to whose who need it. A very sweet poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago

It is a very nice write. Good jobId give you an A

Posted 13 Years Ago

Sorry,me and hope don,t get along.But you made her sound realy great!

Posted 14 Years Ago

What a beautiful piece. It may be short, but it's very powerful. Your poem is so optimistic and I love it. Very well written. Great job.

Posted 14 Years Ago

this is very sweet and true :) It's so nice to find cute poems on here that make you smile, make you feel alright :) Well done.

Posted 14 Years Ago

i think its a great poem, even if it was just written for class... sometimes thats when my best wok comes out.

Posted 14 Years Ago

lovely... i especially like the simile 'she's just like a lifeguard/bringing you back to the surface'... that's just such an uplifting image -- somebody saving your life, giving you strength... it really resonates with what you're saying about the power of hope... glad you got an A, well-deserved :)

Posted 14 Years Ago

I like it i love how u express hope like an actual person

Posted 14 Years Ago

This poem made me smile, the personification becomes, for lack of a better word... personal. When I read this it makes me think about how a certain person in my life gives hope, and in a sense IS hope. The words describe perfectly the experience, and how hope is a powerful emotion.

Posted 14 Years Ago

A very good poem. Must hold on to hope. Without hope and dreams we are but cattle being led to the slaughter. A excellent poem.

Posted 14 Years Ago

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Added on May 17, 2010
Last Updated on May 17, 2010



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