A Most Natural Budding

 

You saturate my carnal garden,

That has been barren for so long

With a sexuality that is so natural,

Nature watches in awe,

As your sensual rain

Brings the seeds of my desire to life

Turning my lust into a beautiful bloom.

Reviews

[Brianna Brie]

Ooh, this is so raw and feral. I absolutely like your word choice! Thanks for entering it in the "Truly Love, Truly Lust" Contest.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much, and it was my pleasure.

[Madalyn Beck]

Ahem.. *fanning myself* This is, uhm, hot in a sort of spring time rain kind of way. I really like this one! (:

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Why thank you so much again… funny to think that anything coming from me as hot :)

[gabrielle]

The first drop of rain after a long drought could revive the entire garden. It's just like being intimate with someone, it could bring the relationship into a deeper level. wonderful analogy.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Oh i love that last part you said, thank you for the input.

[Marie]

Good nature analogy here....lust turning into blooms...

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

thanks Marie.

[Aethereal]

Your poem reminded me of Dionysus. It inspired me to write this mischievous little gift song-poem for you to keep as your own:

Dionysus’ Gardens

Gardens of carnalities
crave an early rain
of cool sexualities,
grapes and white champagne.

Lust and sensualities
dominate the brain
so impetuosities
sprout to bloom again.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Oh very nice, thanks for sharing.

[Jennie Baron]

Wow, how can seven lines be so hot? Very well done.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

I don't know… but thank you for the compliment.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

nice allegory here, Dale...a pleasant light downpour of feelings.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much. My muse is being flirtatious right now.

[Lily Mae]

Throw some fertilizer on this and damn....we would be in the garden of eden... ;) Hot and hot...xo :) lol

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Why thank you so much… nicely said. Made me smile.