Advanced Chemistry

An intimate senryu

 

Two hearts collided,

Now the intimate act is

A big bang theory.

Reviews

[AprilRN1210]

I must be in a silly mood because in my head at the moment I have Sheldon singing "she bangs" in my head.. yes, I am weird.. kidding aside, I have to say this is a thought-provoking way to look at it.. makes you wonder, what the intimate act is, and how do we get it to be more than just a theory:)
nice job as always Dale.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

I lope that show, and Sheldon is awesome… thank you April for your kind words.

[Matching Socks]

And a star was born... :)
(9-1/2 months later)

Beautiful Senryu Dale.
You're still the master at these.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you ever so kindly, I love creating them.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Loved this one Cowboy.You have such a way of saying so much in so few words .You always make me smile :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Well thank you so much, so glad I can make you smile.

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome :)

[Terpsichore]

Really liked this. Clever writing and the title is just brilliant.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much.

[icelandicblue]

Ah very very clever. Nice work!! This made me smile.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Oh good, glad I could make you smile, thank you.

[Lyn Anderson]

Your senryus and short pieces are some of my faves on here. Perfect!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Awe shucks, thank you so much :))
That was the sweetest compliment.

[Lyn Anderson]

I don't dole out compliments -- I really dig the thought you put into the small pieces.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Why thank you so much :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

you are so clever....i wonder how the senryu would read, if they just missed each other...

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Good question… they say football is a game on inches, well Life can be that too.

[Marie]

And a universe is created. Very good senyru.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you Marie.

[Relic]

I imagine the comet of infatuation flew by beforehand. The big bang theory is a clever way to look at it. All forming into one big thing. ;)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much.

[Relic]

You're welcome my friend.