Passion Becomes You

For the inspiration Think tank group challenge

  

Passion becomes you every time

The tips of your fingers

Touch the lifeline to my soul

 

Passion becomes you when

The heat of your body

Matches mine flame for flame.

 

Passion becomes you with

Every beat of your heart

Giving my life rhythm.

 

Passion becomes you in

The way you love me

With no walls or fences.

 

You will be my passion

Even when heaven and hell collide.

 

Reviews

[Windy]

MEOW, hmmmmmm wonder what possibly could have inspired such passionate writing??? ;) Very well done and if you don't do well in that "Think Tank" challange, I am gonna want to know why! This is very Hottt, sizzlin out there in the west my friend? OH, as for the poem.. (he he) well done, very nice flow, really good imagery, love the last stanza.... when it comes to passion, heaven and hell tend to clash somewhat often... Very Well Done Dear Cowboy. Kuddo's to you. ;)

[Gabrielle E. M. T.]

I loved it!
I really enjoyed it.
This was filled with passion.
Very well done.
Amazing imagery.
Simply beautiful.
Excellent!
Lovely.
I don't even know what to say.
I'm surprised I came up with that.
You've left me sppechless.
Great Job!
^_^

[Emily B]

passion becomes YOU

I enjoyed this!

[T]

Passion just oozes out of this beautiful poem, Dale ... Beautifully written, my friend ... A most enjoyable read this evening ... hugs

[Anima Inspired]

Breathtaking imagery in this one... This was an enchanting and delicate piece, so softly written, yet filled with so much passion. Nicely done!

[Mysty Rayn]

This is beautiful. So passionate. I love it. Very touching and so well done. I felt so much of your emotion in this piece.

[Celtic Cat]

gah. I love this. It's so utterly passionate and wonderfully written... a touch of sublime here. Excellent, excellent, excellent!!!

[Jenny Davis]

Lovely, passionate write...Passion becomes YOU too! I really liked the sensual beauty of this piece :)

[Dezaraye]

I like this piece a lot. The repetition of "Passion becomes you" really works well in the piece. It emphasizes all the aspects of the passion and creates the image of the object ... whoever he or she may be for the reader.

Well done!