TOUCH

For my darling Laura

  

You touch my mind

with such true thoughts and opinions

that expands my intellectual stimulus

into a galaxy of stars.

 

You touch my deepest desires

with wild animalistic urges

that the embers of my sexuality

stays burning bright like the Olympic torch.

 

You touch the most sacred part of my heart

with a love so unrestrained

that being with you is like

running free with no fences or walls.

 

You touch my sentimental soul

with a devoted friendship

that you understand what makes

my emotional clock chime every hour.

 

Your touch has become

my sanctuary… my religion… my passion…

 

MY FOREVER AND A DAY!!

 

Reviews

[Norma J. Jessee]

Dale, this is absolutely breath taking. Absolutely perfectly written. The recipient of this beautiful, declaration of love is one lucky lady. To be written a poem of this magnitude would be an honor worth more than gold.
Perfection Dale. Outstanding job.

Jean

This is my all time time favorite.

[~amanda~]

i wish someone wrote this for me! this is such a gorgeous poem, and not cliche like love poems tend to be. i loved the end when you said "your touch has become... my passion"

thats awesome writing. simple and beautiful! great job

[Windy]

What a beautiful romantic poem. Wonderfully done, can feel the emotion and love. I loved the whole thing, the fact that she touches every part of you, but my favorite was "You touch the most sacred part of my heart...................running FREE with no fences or walls. Love can sometimes be almost strangling so haveing a love that sets you FREE is a very special love indeed. Cherish it, honor it and above all, return it. wonderful write my friend. :)

[Dezaraye]

Awww, this is so sweet! I love exploring the senses and the sense of touch is one of my favorites to explore. That and smell ... but anyway, this is so multilayered and so romantic. I love it.

[Nicole (Carpe Diem)]

awww, what a beautiful piece of writing... so lovely....
:D

[Janice Ann]

I know I would swoon if my love wrote this for me! All I can say it rock on my friend! So very sweet and tender and a great way to show your love!
Janice Ann

[John Stussy]

Wonderful tribute to your woman Cowboy. A touch, so strong and holding so much, contains a solid love. May it last your forever and a day. :)

[Lori]

Beautifully written and so earnest. It's always such a joy to read your work....brightens my day.

[An Ordinary Woman]

Aw, this is lovely and heartfelt. I'm always pleased when someone finds that special person. I'm so happy for the both of you. Wishing you both all that life has to offer. Lovely!

Tam
xx

[Lestat's daughter]

This is beautifully written. Well done.