TOUCH

For my darling Laura

  

You touch my mind

with such true thoughts and opinions

that expands my intellectual stimulus

into a galaxy of stars.

 

You touch my deepest desires

with wild animalistic urges

that the embers of my sexuality

stays burning bright like the Olympic torch.

 

You touch the most sacred part of my heart

with a love so unrestrained

that being with you is like

running free with no fences or walls.

 

You touch my sentimental soul

with a devoted friendship

that you understand what makes

my emotional clock chime every hour.

 

Your touch has become

my sanctuary… my religion… my passion…

 

MY FOREVER AND A DAY!!

 

Reviews

[Norma J. Jessee]

Dale, this is absolutely breath taking. Absolutely perfectly written. The recipient of this beautiful, declaration of love is one lucky lady. To be written a poem of this magnitude would be an honor worth more than gold.
Perfection Dale. Outstanding job.

Jean

This is my all time time favorite.

[alternative_be]

This is love to the fullest, so complete, so passionately written, so we can all feel your are really smitten!
I hope the lady is too!
Well, I am not one for short reviews, but now I am baffled for words, which is a good thing, in case you are wondering ...

[Nely Amorim]

It's fantastic to see men in here who can express there deepest love without fear or embarrassment and that to me is a true sign of a poet and a man. this is a wonderful Ode of love to your Lady and I enjoyed the reading of it. It made me smile and think about Albert...:)

[O!]

The best sense ever!! TOUCH!.......

love how u take it beyond sexuality!

again...am happy for u...both!

x,
O!

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

Wonderful poem. I like the repetition you use with the various essences of touch. From one to another. Lovely ode. Thank you for sharing your talent.
Light,
Siddartha

[Monners]

I really really really like this. It's beautiful.

[Victoria Lee~]

Wow... this just blew me away! Absolutely love this!

[Helen Woodward]

Beautiful Dale!!! You are excelling in your prose and content. Your words are so well-placed that I was touched by your honest emotion. I believe a person has to be truely in love to write like this and I hope that is the case for you my friend...The depth of feeling is right there n the page.
Very well-deserved Kudos from me...
Helen :-)

[T]

This is absolutely gorgeous poetry, Dale! It's so nice to read how much a man loves his woman and how she touches every part of him ... Beautifully penned my friend ... hugs

[Last Lying Look]

good poem!
I really liked the thought and emotion that went into this :)