TOUCH

For my darling Laura

  

You touch my mind

with such true thoughts and opinions

that expands my intellectual stimulus

into a galaxy of stars.

 

You touch my deepest desires

with wild animalistic urges

that the embers of my sexuality

stays burning bright like the Olympic torch.

 

You touch the most sacred part of my heart

with a love so unrestrained

that being with you is like

running free with no fences or walls.

 

You touch my sentimental soul

with a devoted friendship

that you understand what makes

my emotional clock chime every hour.

 

Your touch has become

my sanctuary… my religion… my passion…

 

MY FOREVER AND A DAY!!

 

Reviews

[Norma J. Jessee]

Dale, this is absolutely breath taking. Absolutely perfectly written. The recipient of this beautiful, declaration of love is one lucky lady. To be written a poem of this magnitude would be an honor worth more than gold.
Perfection Dale. Outstanding job.

Jean

This is my all time time favorite.

[MagicHearted Knight]

This is a very powerful and elegant piece. I am blown away by how deeply moving it is.

[Fran Marie]

that you understand what makes

my emotional clock chime every hour.



Your touch has become

my sanctuary� my religion� my passion�



MY FOREVER AND A DAY!!

Truly a loving and devoted piece of poetry~

and when one can understand the emotional

clock of another, that is a rare quality,

and a true connection ~ very nicely donE!~

Fran

[.::Cup^E^Cake*RaWr!*::.]

Wow this is such a beautiful piece!
If you haven't you should deff give her her own copy this will touch her heart in a way no other could!!
You did so amazing on this piece!!

[Wildfleour]

Cowboy - This one comes straight from your heart and soul. So sweet.

[emz]

Oh Dale this is truly a beautiful declaration of love and thankfulness, your words were wonderfully written, what a lucky girl to recieve such emotional writing.

How i would love to find a person who i touched so deeply they felt the need to give me such a special gift as you have done for your lady.

Wonderful, glorious, gorgeous

x

[Anima Inspired]

Such a rare gift in life...to come across a person who touches you so deeply on so many different levels. There are plenty of people who I come across on a daily basis that can touch on part of my being, but to inhabit each and every layer of me until I'm completely and wholy thiers...that's rare. You've written this beautifully...

[siri]

this is such a beautiful piece i love it so much everything about it is beautiful you wrote it beautiful the words are powerful and hold tons of emotion you captured what you were trying to capture proffesionally! great job thanks for sharing!

[Angelic Darkness]

This is going into my favorites. This is just wonderful, and how you
expressed so many depths of your soul in this poem. AD

[Carole]

Yes indeed, the love bug has bitten and it is a most extra ordinary kind! This is a beautiful, love filled write for another beautiful human being, just like yourself...Your choice of words in this piece is astounding. It flows with a simple elegance. Well done, my friend...Carole

[Lia]

Beautiful piece, really amazing write. x