Third Eye Warning

 

Hypnotic reenactment

Is the quickest way

To perfect vision;

Side effect-      

Harmful to those

Who love you

       Just as you are.

Cause and effect

Is a given,

Going way beyond hindsight.

To see a cloudy sky

Doesn’t mean the sun

Is not burning through your soul.

Why use the crystal ball

When you can step in quicksand?

Keep that third eye blindfolded

Or you may miss the here and now.

Reviews

[Liza]

I see your point about third eye blinded....why live in tomorrow when we are here right now....but today is a yesterday that we set up the day before yesterday - i get it i get it.....what's promised today? the present...it's our gift :) thank u for that wonderful and creative reminder :)

[Ladysue]

You are brilliant my friend. How true this is...You out did yourself with this one...Excellent!!!

[Tracie Skarbo]

big smiles for this one. You look like rambo with that headband! Awesome job.

[closed account]

Why use the crystal ball
When you can step in quicksand?


noooo kidding!! those two lines said it all!! this was
brilliant!!! awesome and yes,,, keep it blindfolded or infact
poke it out!! lol,, it's just going to get you in trouble!
bravo!!

[Katie]

Sweet Jesus.. Your work literally like sucks me in.. This rings so true in life. Great piece, my friend :)

[Stacey Watts]

Very well written. No truer words have ever been written. Well done.

[Wildfleour]

Right on, Dale! :)