Voyeur Moon

Short but has meaning

 

The moon stares down

at an unmarked grave

awaiting the time

it can smile upon

blood rich soil.

Reviews

[An Ordinary Woman]

A watching moon.

Voyeuristic and smiling. wow. Really well put together. I likey!

[Tarik]

so small yet so powerful. Thanks for sharing.

[Desert Dreamer]

Death brings life...the contents of the unmarked grave fertilize the ground so new life can grow....at least that is what I imagine would make the moon smile.

[Sheila Kline]

Oh yes! Your write is short but whallops a PUNCH!! The moon reigns as voyeur of times when it may see once again the effects of spilled blood....by which means matters not! It may perhaps see all!!

[Gheeneil]

Such perspective is a peep hole toward invading private moments. Keep writing.

[The Analog Kid]

Very mysterious. I am with Chloe. My analysis (LOL) is based on "smile." Very successful thought-provoking compact poem!

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deliciously dark..love the idea...

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

Yes, short with much meaning. I think i get a different meaning than many below.
The moon wants to smile. Blood rich soil...for me this means a better earth and people. I don't know ! I know it is very thought provoking.

Chloe

[Tina Kline]

Very dark and sinister. The moon is just waiting....waiting....waiting...
This does have quite the impact. Brilliant, I love it!