Voyeur Moon

Short but has meaning

 

The moon stares down

at an unmarked grave

awaiting the time

it can smile upon

blood rich soil.

Reviews

[Cherrie Palmer]

The title catches the eye and then the poem makes you contemplate, what next.

[Zachary_James]

WOW very good

[Liza]

hmmmmm the moon watches us....it moves us as it controls masses of water like the ocean....perhaps what you're leading us to believe is that it smiles at us because it is controlling our lives and our death....? either way -- thought provoking...

[CarrieLynn {Chameleon A..]

Short and Stunning! Great Write!

[My Fair Lady]

I'm interested to know more about the meaning behind this. Somehow haunting.. but more like life's nature... very thought provoking indeed.

[Joanna Maharis]

beautiful imagery. intriguing. thoughtprovoking.

[OT]

oo creepy!! I can feel the moon's stare on my back!! a sinister moon indeed!!

[Narnie]

That moon needs to lighten up. *shivers* Wouldn't it be awful if it was actually sinister rather than the lovely dreamy thing we like to think it is? Haha, good poem cowboy :)

[Ice QueenJen]

oh this is far different from what I usually read from you. This has an ominous vibe to it, kind of creepy and knowing that it waits for the time someone dies it can smile.

[Dezaraye]

This one is dark and a little gory sounding ... It made me shudder and decide I didn't want to look for the moon tonight. Lol.