If they are broken

If we leave them

They will break

And if they are broken

We will teach them

When they learn

They will lead

Our future generations will be strong

We will lead world with broken men

We broke them to be free

To understand the world

They will make more broken men

Our society will have broken soliders for guard

For congressmen and for world leaders

As we break them we show them the truth

The lies are crushed

And they won't be decieved

And they will tell their kids the truth of time

As it ends infront of them 

Reviews

[James Darrow]

A very interesting poem, one that does provoke quite a bit of thought. There's a surface message here that has a bit of thought, but I feel like there's a deeper message underneath it that has a lot of truth and honesty to it. Overall, I really enjoyed it. The only reason I can knock it for anything is a couple of typos, but that's all.

[Bianca La Salle]

interesting, but good