What happens

What happens

A Poem by Decaf

What happens if I die

Who will care

What happens if my life is turnd upside down

Who will be there for me

What happens when my family gets brutally murdered

Who will let me live with them

What happens when I cry

Who will let me cry on there shoulder

What happens when your family dies and your crying

I'll be there for you

I'll always help you

What would you do for me

© 2011 Decaf


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What happens if my life is turnd upside down
*turned
:) Typo

This was good. The question at the end was a powerful part of the poem, what would they do for you if you'd do everything for them?...Very nice job

Posted 12 Years Ago


great poem!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Great(:

Posted 12 Years Ago


i enjoyed this write!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Great questions, you did a good job. I liked and enjoyed it a lot. Keep up the good work.
♥ Ta'Shandra

Posted 12 Years Ago


This poem is very cool, I like the simplicity of this write.
I love the questions in this write, this must come from a talented mind.
Flawless job, I enjoyed reading

Posted 12 Years Ago


awesome questions... and great feeling behind them and thought, this is a really good write, not to long but yet it has reason to it and feeling and makes a deep point, i like this, enjoyed it well

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Hard questions, all of them. Definitely worth tackling. Just one thing: I would recommend either a spellchecker or a proofreader. Making sure you've got the basics covered can really strengthen your work. Keep it up!

Posted 12 Years Ago


hmmm... it's a little dark for me.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Decaf
Decaf

Burleson, TX



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I'm a fun guy that has a deep heart and mind. My name is Decaf like the coffee. It's awesome I'm a skater, I'm also an ex cutter. more..

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