Daddy's happy

You don't have a reason

Your logic is off

You don't care

You don't listen

You just wish I was never born

You wish you could see me die

You want my in the endless fire

You may say you love me

But when i screamed

Where were you

Where were you when I had died

Where were you when they gave me cpr

Where were you when they rushed me to the hospital

Where were you when I was forever cold

Where were you when they called my father

You didnt pick up dad

You saw this coming

You never brought your son your last goodbye

But I brought you my goodbye

I never cryied to my death like you taught me

I had screamed for you

I gave you what you wanted

I killed myself to make you happy dad

Reviews

[BrittBratt]

Whoa... Not only did it give me goose bumps, but it brought tears to my eyes. Me and my father don't get along either, I truly can relate to this one. I love it. Well done!

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Whew wow... that is emotionally deep and painful in a sad and lonely way. Really nice, love this part:
"You never brought your son your last goodbye
But I brought you my goodbye
I never cryied to my death like you taught me"
Touching piece.

[Coyote Poetry]

A powerful and sad poem. To kill yourself for another would make you the fool. Better to torture the person and stay alive. I like the anger and the directness in the words. A very sad ending to a amazing poem of disappointment.
Coyote