The day we meet

The day we meet will be filled with warmth

The day we meet will last forever

The day I see you my heart will skip 3000 beats

The day i see you we'll lay smiling at each other

The day we're together is the day you'll melt in my arms

The day we're together is the day i'll feel your warmth

Years after we meet we'll hear a crying

Years after we meet we'll grow old together

Reviews

[I Am Svetlana]

I love how you repeated the first four or five words of each line for every two lines. I feel this gave it more meaning, more depth and how you ended with the saying as years from now, that was really clever and creative of you to do that. Reading this reminded me of a long distance relationship and how two people would write to eachother in all future tense as if they were already in the same place and living their lives. Cute write with a powerful meaning :) Keep up the good work!