A moment from God

A moment from God

A Poem by Baby Ricochet
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Have you ever gotten a moment of clarity and you could see through the veil your ego throws up and for just a moment you touched divinity? This is one of those moments for me

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Life is a moment
On your breath

Life is a gift
Heaven sent

Life is precious
and multifold

Life is action
and manifold

A beautiful life
Is in our grasp

We can't see it
it goes right past

Life is still
Slow it down

Life will move
With you around

Just be still
For a while

Watch the ants
as they perspire

Leaves will fall
Time will pass

You will know
yourself at last

A beautiful moment
A warm embrace

Breath the moment
Breath the grace

Sitting still in A
Moment of bliss

Thank your life
For all you miss









© 2013 Baby Ricochet


Author's Note

Baby Ricochet
Quickie phone write. I have these moments where out of the blue I can hear God. I don't mean Gods "talking to me" or I'm speaking in tongues or some bullshit like that. I mean like suddenly everything makes stupid simple sense as if a 4 year old would know it. Like just genuinely love everyone for no good reason. Sometimes I'm amazed how much God can put up with from me and still show up from out of nowhere and make me say, Damn, why do I ignore you most of the time? I'm retarded

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I feel like this sometimes...mostly your author's note; like, why have I abandoned my faith? I mean, I know why I abandoned my religion, my Catholicism, but why have I abandoned my faith? This is an incredibly thought provoking piece...one which has made me examine my own core values, and I cannot thank you enough for that.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

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Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

Well thank you kimmer. I'm genuinely flattered.
Linda J. Harris

11 Years Ago

I am joining a Baptist church. It has changed my life and I'm excited to learn about God the correct.. read more



Reviews

My favorite lines are -

"Leaves will fall
Time will pass"

"You will know
yourself at last".

:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

Thank you George
Mary Christabel George

11 Years Ago

Welcome Baby
Your soft side has its own little soothing melody that can provide a sense of protection to whomever you choose to protect.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

Thank you Tai
So sweet to read your soft side... Life has a way of reaching out to you!..."Hello, it's God here"... sometimes you just need to stop and smell the roses or enjoy the sunshine to be touched by divinity. This is a wonderful write, my friend!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

Thank you Robbie
It would be so wonderful f we could have this all the time. But the most we can hope for are those fleeting moments.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

That's for sure
yeah - its awesome when THAT happens... makes you wish it would more.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

It makes me wish I worked at it more. Thanks for stopping by Chris. HOORAH!
This piece is full of truth, Ric. Thank you for sharing your moment of insight so skillfully. P.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

Thank you Pete
well, this is certainly an inspired piece, and quite a departure form your usual style, but it speaks volumes and is just awesome in its message. the couplet format is very effective and the words just seem to be inspired by divine intervention. ricochet, this is a beautiful write. you may color me immensely impressed!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

Thank you quinfinn
This one is a different read from you, sounds like you're coming from a very good place...'what's love got to do with it?'...came to mind. Just saying, nice one BR! ;-)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

Thank you Frieda
Well written
Well Said
Well thought... a privilege to read.
Zen like in a way. "Yogalistic" and meditative.
A very classy feel to this one, BR.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

Thank you Mr G.
:) i feel that, absolutly do, and i agree with you, sometimes you just have to close your eyes and see with your heart the amazing things this world has to offer, God is love, care and simply heart satisfaction

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

For sure. Thank you Aurora
Salar Majak

11 Years Ago

:)

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