The Third Eye

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The third eye sees when you tell your mother that you drunk the milk,

But it had gone into a flower pot.

 

The third eye sees when you say: “homework is chopped by my dog!”,

But it had not.

 

Third eye notices when you break the pot,

And blame your little brother.

 

Third eye sees when you eat pancakes,

When your parents went outside.

 

Third eye sees when you say you are doing your homework,

But you are reading comics.

 

The third sees when you watch television,

More than you’re supposed to be.

 

Third eye sees,

Which we don’t see.

The third eye sees,

Which you don’t want to show.

 

Author's Note

Beware! May be the third eye is watching you!

Reviews

[Pax]

I can only see three possibilities:

One is the own self’s reflection- the one will always see's the truth of what you do… can be a state of conscience but i believe some people doesn't have that treat... so i can tell to those person who create the mirror self-reflecting images in the mind... there are many types of human consciousness and it holds the key of all the truth we hold on into..

Second one is the government spy gadgets – like Big brother is always watching us… even in the internet all our mail have been filtered for terrorist messaging… I have studied about that on how the government filters all the information around the sea of information(internet)… our privacy is always invaded like freedom is constrained.

Third is God – in the spiritual aspect I always knew God is always watching us, he works in a very mysterious ways… his the only higher being who can see pass through the façade we portrayed- he will always see the real you…

Awesome work my friend!

[Devanshu Rajput]

I totally agree with your all possibility.

Really God, Self's reflection and Government can spy anyone.

I really appreciate your words.

Thanks for reading.

Take care

Devanshu

[Pax]

your most welcome :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Yup, this makes sense.

[dan]

Devanshu, I received your friend request and am accepting it. Please be aware that if I review your work then you must reciprocate and do the same for me. Nice to 'meet' you. So this third eyes sees me when I'm doing something I should not be doing? If I drive over the speed limit will it turn me in to the police? Or is it a benevolent eye? I guess time will tell. take care...dan

[Devanshu Rajput]

It depends upon the it's orey....lol.....

Why not? I will, indeed reciprocate!

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Devanshu

[Helena]

I've no doubt that the "third eye" is watching us all, as well as the 'evil eye'....shudder!!!!

Good write my friend, original and interesting.



Namaste,

Helena (Blue Rose)

[Devanshu Rajput]

Ya, as Pax said, there can be endless possibilites. Thanks for the kind words.

But hey! Greeting in Hindi? Thanks for it. But, how did you find out it?

Thanks again for letting me feel privileged.

Devanshu

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked this poem. The third eye is alive and active. I like the flow of thoughts and the very good ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Emrick]

The third eye is more than an eye.It never closes nor lose it's sight.
Nice message in your poem Devanshu.

[yuta]

I really enjoyed this poem. If anyone knows about chakra they will understand the third eye..

[Tate Morgan]

Well that would be the thing to chase me all my days always doing what I'm not supposed to

[Scott Mou]

Nice! I Like how the "third eye" represents karma(?). Also the last stanza is great!

[stars are far]

That was so nice and an amazing write ...
well done

[Baby Ricochet]

That Goddamn third eye better not snitch

[Onyia-Ali, Kingsley Chu..]

The concept reaaly entrilled me. Well done.