The Third Eye

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The third eye sees when you tell your mother that you drunk the milk,

But it had gone into a flower pot.

 

The third eye sees when you say: “homework is chopped by my dog!”,

But it had not.

 

Third eye notices when you break the pot,

And blame your little brother.

 

Third eye sees when you eat pancakes,

When your parents went outside.

 

Third eye sees when you say you are doing your homework,

But you are reading comics.

 

The third sees when you watch television,

More than you’re supposed to be.

 

Third eye sees,

Which we don’t see.

The third eye sees,

Which you don’t want to show.

 

Author's Note

Beware! May be the third eye is watching you!

Reviews

[Pax]

I can only see three possibilities:

One is the own self’s reflection- the one will always see's the truth of what you do… can be a state of conscience but i believe some people doesn't have that treat... so i can tell to those person who create the mirror self-reflecting images in the mind... there are many types of human consciousness and it holds the key of all the truth we hold on into..

Second one is the government spy gadgets – like Big brother is always watching us… even in the internet all our mail have been filtered for terrorist messaging… I have studied about that on how the government filters all the information around the sea of information(internet)… our privacy is always invaded like freedom is constrained.

Third is God – in the spiritual aspect I always knew God is always watching us, he works in a very mysterious ways… his the only higher being who can see pass through the façade we portrayed- he will always see the real you…

Awesome work my friend!

[Devanshu Rajput]

I totally agree with your all possibility.

Really God, Self's reflection and Government can spy anyone.

I really appreciate your words.

Thanks for reading.

Take care

Devanshu

[Pax]

your most welcome :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Yup, this makes sense.

[SHEEMA HUQ]

I like the concept and your exploration of it, well done.

[Devanshu Rajput]

Thank you :)

[ron]

Very nice. Good job on the third eye. Most people dont know about it.

[Holly Mason]

I hope not ....
quite clever young man...we never know who is watching
dang milk in the flower pot- watch that plant grow through the roof, now that would be funny
but no matter who is watching us...we ourselves know what we have done*)
third eye called his name is guilty and wants his patience back hahaha
thank you fine young man*)

[Devanshu Rajput]

maybe jack's beanstalk was grown through the sky with the same milk...lol...
Thank You!!! for the comment....

Take care

Devanshu

[Perkele.7885]

Big Brother is always watching! Ever looking over your shoulder! If you are doing things as you should, well....there will no reason to expect to be caught with your hand in the proverbial cookie jar. The third eye, Big Brother or conscience, they are all the same by any name! Good write!

[Aethereal]

And more importantly, the third eye is what we really are deep inside of our minds. It's the super ego within our subconscious mind. If we rebel against our true selves, then our conscious mind brings dire consequences against itself since our subconscious mind pulls all the strings on the conscious mind. We discover our true selves through meditation. Our conscious mind is a rascal who's always getting itself into unnecessary trouble. Long before the advent of Modern Psychology, human beings have always suspected that they had minds composed of conscious and subconscious. Ancient religions were always about ways and means of self discovery, whereby they called the subconscious mind the mystical mind. Most of us don't know who we really are, or why we do the things that we do.

[Devanshu Rajput]

Thanks for reading.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

The third eye can see everything...anywhere...anytime.
No one can deceive it.
You may only feel or think of something, but it can be seen by that eye from your mind, and from your heart. You may just planning of it, but that eye can see the future.

Be guided. God's eye always see things unseen by us.

Nice concept.

[gombeggar]

good conception...needs an edit

[Devanshu Rajput]

i also think so. It really would be great if someone will help me with it. Thanks for reading.

[gombeggar]

it is good to have someone help u with that 2 start with...but u gotta learn 2 edit yerself...read it thru a few times...one good step to becoming an editor as well as a writer is reading a LOT especially the classics

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

It is indeed a powerful thing.

[Leandro Mendez]

it sees everything man, be careful what you do haha

[Patrick O'Neil]

Very true and nicely written. I wonder if we could see with the same vision as the third eye, how different would we look. Nice poem.