The Bumble Bee

The Bumble Bee

A Poem by Brown Bull
"

Science proved that is aerodynamicaly impossible for a Bumble Bee to fly! They just never told the bee.

"

The Bumble Bee

 

One day a little bumble bee
came to my meadow green.

He was perhaps the cutest bug,
that I had ever seen.

 

And as he buzzed without a rest,
it helped me see just why.

You toil all day in what you do,
‘cause he’s not supposed to fly.

 

© 2010 Brown Bull


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Hi. You might take a look at the first line in the third stanza. Maye it was supposed to say he? Lovely poem about being yourself, I believe. I enjoyed it as I do all your work.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Very well written and enjoyed. Deserves to be seen and read by many. Thanks for the inspiration.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

really? woah... then it makes a good metaphor that if we just believe, impossible things could be achieved... that faith and will can move mountains...

lovely, lovely... with all honesty, i like your poems and your subjects!



Posted 14 Years Ago


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There are many odds against us when we try to do the impossible. If we "hold fast to our dreams" we just might be able to accomplish them. This was a poem filled with hope and inspiration. What type of poem is this? 868686? It is new to me. :)

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