I AM VAMPIRE

They Call me a mystical creature of the night…

My powers are absolute…

I can bend you to my will….

I can purge your life force with my thoughts….

You are mine….

Your body belongs to me….

I will satisfy my blood lust….

Love you with unbidden passion…..

I am vampire….

And you are my only hope for salvation…..

 

Reviews

[Natalie C]

Brilliantly dark. Just loving the way you captured my mind with your unique format and excellent dark imagery.

Just loved

And you are my only hope for salvation...

Great line, very well thought out to bring this whole piece together so perfectly.
Loved reading this, thanks for sharing!

[Nannette LaRee~]

I enjoyed reading this piece you've penned like I enjoy Anne Rice! SWEETTTTTTTTTTTTT!!!

[* Mourning Starr *]

Very, very nicely done Diana.....I loved the power this exuded......short, but very well delivered

[V]

This is delicious.

I will satisfy my blood lust...

I like the different style. Kind of like thoughts being whispered into the night. I enjoyed this piece, it was arrogant, but still loving, hehe.
Well Done
V.

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

Love the poem, love vampyres and anything written about them.. i like this one very much..
Love you with unbidden passion... i am vampire.. good write.
Chloe
xoxo

[Robert Luna]

Mmm this is so delightful. I love the image that you painted in my mind's eye. i could see a vampire almost at a speaking engagement and doing a question and answer.

Loved It!!!

[Jenny Davis]

This is unique in style and written with great imagination. It seems you have penned both respect and fear of vampires and their power. Very nice :)

[Sean R. Ewing]

oooo i liked this one lol. Dark and thought provoking. Well done.