Surrender to the Night

Night Controls my life,

It's a cold that surrounds my blackened heart.

A dreamless state throughout the day.

A hunger that does not subside.

It's my own hatred that consumes me,

This hell is my world.

 

I am not alive, but undead.

My sould is damned to enter

in to eternity.

I walk this world alone as an immortal.

A kiss of darkness has condemned me

to drown in a crimson tide.

 

Pain is a curse that follows,

I am the fear in humans,

I am the monster in the dark.

 

Please forgive me...

Please forgive me for what I am.

For I have surrendered to the night.

 

 

Author's Note

this is just a restore

Reviews

[Brette Medb]

I really, really liked this and you used one of my favorite words; subside! It sounds so weird that one of my favorite words would be subside but it is, I just like the way it rolls off the tongue.

Really good imagery! I like the crimson tide as well. Great work, thanks for sending it to me!

[Britt]

Oh my goodness that gave me chills. Love the pictures as well. You're an amazing writer!

[* Mourning Starr *]

ohhhhh vampires got to love emmmmm, so dark, so sexy, sooooo just flippen wonderful, loved the piece.....great read , nice flow and amazing imagery....

[S. P. Vaporis]

Delightfully dark! I love the shadowed imagery. Good writing !

[Fantasyfairy]

Great imagination. I really like this, so very dark! The strutcture of this is great and the words you use paint such a dark picture. Wonderful to read, thanx for sharing hun XX