CUMBRIA'S EDGE

CUMBRIA'S EDGE

A Poem by kitty
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If dreams could come true!

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                    CUMBRIA'S EDGE
Oh to be at Cumbria's edge,
where land meets sea!
With the brace of wind upon your face.
Oh to bathe in sunlit beams and embrace its grace.
to taste a salty kiss on anxious lips ...
when swish of swaying grass brush happy finger tips.
Alone I sit on bench for three
I look around and think of thee.
Imagination takes a ride>>>
I fly to you, bring you by my side
and feel your energy within.
Anxious toes hug shoreline sands.
What fun it is to climb up grassy bands!
Oh to rest exhausted body pon greenest land!
Reactivate those dormant dreams.
Let them explode in vibrant song.
I am alive, renewed and strong!
Created @ 7.40 pm Sunday 5th May 2019

© 2019 kitty


Author's Note

kitty
Swept up in the effects of sunshine on mind and body.

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Dearest Kitty*

Your words are more than beautiful, enchanting, energetic to the senses, I always love this energetic positivity Your poems bring, and what I always admire about Your works that in their flowing beauty You send a meaningful message. love this so much, I love the happy joyous feelings it brings, Thank You for sharing Your blissful moments with us.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kitty

5 Months Ago

Feel so 'connected' with most writers on this site ..from whom I get so much inspiration. Thank you!



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You took me to Buttermere Looking across the lake at the Red Pike range Fleetwith Pike to the left, with the cross which marks where the poor servant girl fell many years ago. Round the corner into Warnscales where the slate miners rode the heavy sleds loaded with freshly quarried slate

Thank you

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kitty

4 Months Ago

In love with a country so beautiful and green much to do, much to be seen. Great visits still clear .. read more
Wild Rose

4 Months Ago

Yes I got two jobs - one on the outskirts of London with much higher pay and another here on the wes.. read more
kitty

4 Months Ago

Nature rules!
This seems to me a very heartfelt poem Kitty. Its impossible to disentangle place with earlier memories. In happier times its easy to forget that it might not always be so. Its easy to say life must go on but its not always that easy.
I liked this poem and it made me think of places I had been.
All the best,
Alan


Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kitty

4 Months Ago

Memories shared, stirs up lovely, warm feelings at the best of times. Thank you so much for this val.. read more
What an uplifting experience the sun can be after a period of inclement weather or mood. You took me to Cumbria with you kitty, and I was on that bench with you admiring the view. A good to be alive poem.

Chris

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kitty

4 Months Ago

So glad you came by Christine. This is a place that takes me back to the land of my birth. Happy to .. read more
Christine Anne Shaw

4 Months Ago

I'm all for sun kitty. Have a great day.

Chris
You take me there! :-)))

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kitty

4 Months Ago

Thank you so much for this visit. Glad I am able to bring the beautiful scenes I captured with my fa.. read more
Lea Sheryn

4 Months Ago

You're welcome. You certainly did capture it beautifully.
With your words, you take the reader there. I felt the sun and the sea and I felt happy, right here in a closed space in my office. Great poetry brings the reader alive.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kitty

5 Months Ago

Putting myself right where you are: it was in 2001 0r there abouts that , in reminising, I created o.. read more
DIVYA

5 Months Ago

To me it’s of relevance. How a small bit of nature’s beauty can help one weave poetry. I find yo.. read more
kitty

5 Months Ago

Thank you so much for dropping in.
Dearest Kitty*

Your words are more than beautiful, enchanting, energetic to the senses, I always love this energetic positivity Your poems bring, and what I always admire about Your works that in their flowing beauty You send a meaningful message. love this so much, I love the happy joyous feelings it brings, Thank You for sharing Your blissful moments with us.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kitty

5 Months Ago

Feel so 'connected' with most writers on this site ..from whom I get so much inspiration. Thank you!
bunny just woke up so his eyes are a little fuzzy but I have to say I like the tone of this it has a lulling longing & loving langue in its lines A very authentic feel & enjoy (as always) I love the rhythm & rhyme to this :)

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kitty

5 Months Ago

Glad you liked it. Enjoyed putting it together. Thanks for visiting.
Very beautiful words. I throughly enjoyed this c:

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kitty

5 Months Ago

Your kind words are much appreciated. Thank you.
what a beautiful county and true..... it has been far too long since my last visit...

and I desperately need to place some flowers in St' Georges Church Millom.... thanks for reminding me..... Neville

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kitty

5 Months Ago

Thank you for this visit Neville. In appreciation for graces ...Flowers!
Neville

5 Months Ago

you are most welcome kitty and true... N
I could have been in Cornwall by the Fowey in this one. I could see the lone figure sitting looking out at the water and longing, dreaming. A flowing rhyming piece full of salty tears washed away by the power of the sun.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kitty

5 Months Ago

Don't know why but your review put a warm smile across my would be sad face. Glad you picked up on t.. read more
John Alexander McFadyen

5 Months Ago

Glad it put that smile across your face Kitty. I am a sun worshiper who has often found solar solace.. read more
kitty

5 Months Ago

Sunshine relly does a lot to elate our being.

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kitty
kitty

Bexhill on Sea, East Sussex, United Kingdom



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