BROKEN

An indescribable damaged contraction bleeds tears to chase the liquor ingested

Mind states numb as thoughts run disturbed
A hand of depression dips pictures of remembering into a dissolve
Ache…
Behind stolen powers beautiful obsessions become nightmares
Against universal language weakness becomes unnerving
It’s a constant…
An infinity of a fatal unique rage that burns anguished questions of
“Why did you have to do this to me?”
Flame…
It deepens with a richly colored sharp tip that draws downward slicing the soul
With every breath taken it leaves wounds that contain powers of confusion
Sensations… deluded 

Author's Note

inspired by a friend... cant help but feel for her

Reviews

[MAC]

wow, very rich with emotions and darkness. excellent write!

[Alana McGuire]

Wooow. You really have a way with words. The way you beld the words together is really beautiful, even when written about a not so beautiful situation.
You make me feel for your friend myself, and I've not met her.
And I really like the picture a lot. I think it goes very well with the poem.

[Manpreet]

Beautiful write!

[Adalynn]

Great write i enjoyed reading it..

Adalynn

[Amila Jay]

This is rich!! I love the write, excellent poem:-)

[Dom]

I really liked this one. It was dark and emotional which is right up my alley lol. Great job!

[André-J-Franklin]

A picture is truly worth a thousand words! This is dark but question poem i like it. Keep up the great work look forward to more by you.

[Tenebrousoul]

Haunting. Powerful.

[Me]

Good one