LIQUID SUNSHINE

LIQUID SUNSHINE

A Poem by Cassie Fraga
"

breathe.....

"
A rush of emotion painted in up right patterns
Love letting loose her desires
She smiles as the overall outcome to deep sea situation
Echoing in the coming and going
A triumph
A win

© 2012 Cassie Fraga


Author's Note

Cassie Fraga
this pic is just that beautiful!!

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I think the poem fits the picture well. I get the sense that the lines about love connect with the gleaming golds and oranges on the waves.

I'm not really sure about the last two lines though. I think you can create something that has the essence of beauty which you capture so well in the opening lines of this poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago


A total sensual delight... inspirational and uplifting...Thank you for sharing the well penned moment.

Posted 12 Years Ago



Delightful poem, truly inspiring.

I enjoyed this..!

Posted 12 Years Ago


"Echoing in the coming and going" is my favourite line :D The picture goes well with it ^^
Romantic, and the structure of the lines remind me of the waves flowing up the beach and back again, which does emphasize the "echoing in the coming and going" line. I love it :D

Posted 12 Years Ago


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The pic is beautiful, but not as beautiful as the poem. That is truly stunning work.

Posted 12 Years Ago


stunning..very inspiring

Posted 12 Years Ago


Feels like the beginning of something new...such a refreshing vision of liquid sunshine. This Lovely Sis!

Posted 12 Years Ago


I love the flow and the way it makes me feel like I'm floating into every new moment..xo

Posted 12 Years Ago


This poem is a compelling piece atop a good title enriched the flow.. :-)

Posted 12 Years Ago



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