Who am I?

Human heart is full of questions and issues, sometimes you are unsure of your own presence and personality, you search for your inner self. A poem depicting one of the darkest situation of human heart

My heart is so empty

My soul is so dark

There's fear inside me

That's tearing me apart 

 

This life is so worthless

This  feeling is so cold

Its a demon or a beast 

I want to be told

 

Told about my own self

My own image, my past

Am I human or Ace of spades

From devils deck of card?

 

Why am I so hated

Or may be loved by some

I have feeling that its a question

With no answer to come 

 

This heart is in pain

And mind is in chaos

Can someone tell me

What is in my heart?

 

I am sad, confused and lonely

Why it turned out this way

Am I on right path 

Or have been led astray?

 

Help me oh God!!

If  there really is you

I ask you to please

Tell me through.

 

Tell who I am?

Which side is really mine

Is it the morning smile?

Or the dark night? 

 

My whole self is paining

And I am crying

 I don't even know myself

Its even worse than dying

 

Who knows which one is me?

I want some one to share 

Is it me who hurts all?

Or one that really cares?

 

I don't know myself yet

But hope I'll know soon

Even though its painful

But I'll keep moving on

 

When some day I'll know myself

After a day, week or year long

I'll take up my page and pen

And will turn it into a song

 

My song is no other thing

Its just my heart crying 

They are just feeling from my heart

In which I put some rhyme

 

My heart is so empty

My soul is so dark

There's fear inside me

That's tearing me apart.  

 

Reviews

[Talismanic]

Deep words. Real questions. Poignant and astounding. I've heard it said that while we live we fear death, that is, we fear the separation and loneliness which is actually life. I wish we would allow our hearts to cry because there seems to be no innocence in the world. Because we understand reason only with a human rationality, we think we have none. We are capable of both atrocities and miracles, of feeling so much love but also so much pain.
'My heart aches
and a drowsy numbness fills my senses
as though of hemlock i had drunk' (J Keats).
Your chorus kind of reminded me of this famous poem.

Pure harmony... :)

[EileenMarie]

Very expressive! Beautifully written!

[Akhand Pratap Singh]

thank you :)

[natzky]

really nice....heheh...this is one of my favorite..;)
all hail..:)

[Akhand Pratap Singh]

ohh! its my pleasure that you liked it!! thank you

[Brandon Mathis]

very great rhyming and poem on its own. Review some of mine please be honest, thank you.

[Akhand Pratap Singh]

sure I will.. I am glad you liked it :)

[Akhand Pratap Singh]

Thank you for your reviews @tailsmanic and selkietales, the details that you mentioned @selkietales are quite good one, I'll try to improve on things like that, so that next time I come up with even better poem. Oh, yeah Luffy rocks :)

[selkietales]

"From devils deck of card?" Card should be cards.
"My whole self is paining" Paining.... what exactly? this is a sentence fragment thing that isn't even completed in the next line. I think you meant pained.
"My song is no other thing/Its just my heart crying /They are just feeling from my heart/In which I put some rhyme" I don't think that this adds to the poem and it feels kind of out of place.
Anywho, I like the poem a lot! I usually skip long ones because they're tedious, but I kept reading yours so that means that yours kept me interested. Oh, and I saw your profile pic- yay Luffy!

[Akhand Pratap Singh]

Thank you Atiba, and it makes me happy to say that I love reading your poems as well.. they are amazing..

[Akhand Pratap Singh]

Thank you poetry love :)

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Wow, simply powerful, deep and emotional. Nicely expressed