Beggar Subject

Beggar Subject




splendid heartbreak

she was the queen of goodbyes

royalty to send me reeling

edict not of etiquette

but floundering foresight of emotion

empty throne
crown of thorns,
the garden's empty
and i am again a pauper
sole heir to a kingdom
of nothing.



erin-cilberto
11/3/15

Reviews

[paddy d daly]

The best and worst off all
world's thrown into one, the
King is dead, long live the King.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

so true...thank you for your words, paddy.

j.

[...]

Thing of it is, Jacob, it's not "nothingness" that comes from it when you turn it into art that touches others. Nothingness is void of emotion and you, sir, have plenty of it :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

you are kind, thank you, lynn.

j.

[Linda alexander]

Well portrayed how certain relations can make us either break to nothings or to make us everything. I really wish we all have a extra sense to scan all these personalities . Great reflection on relationships

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, Linda.

j.

[Alfred Kukitz]

Ok.....Ok so its nothingness again. Don't give it such a bad rap. I walk out into the nothingness everyday and sometimes I find the EVERYTHING NESS.

regards,
al

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, some can do that....:)

thanks Al...

j.

[alifeacoustic]

Sounds like this was written during a long hard night of the soul, delving into the chasm that once was full. Love the floundering foresight of emotion line.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, alife...

j.