a sentence ending with emotional prepositions

a sentence ending with emotional prepositions 

 

 

 

evasive subjects,

careless verbs ask questions

infer pronoun references without thinking first

 

how the gerunds might object

to infinite infinitive inquisition,

 

adjectives are more than ready to talk

they want to describe incessantly

 

but the dangling participles

nod their heads "no"

then try to find a place to sit

 

all is quiet,

an ellipsis of uncomfortable silence,

but during that period,

 

quotation marks decipher thoughts

that are better left

dangling

than said,

 

a transition between love

 

and

 

a few missing conjunctions.

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

1/8/16

Reviews

[Jennesis]

Brilliant! I love that line About 'quotation marks decipher thoughts that are better left dangling than said''
In love and relationships, we can't always say what we want to, for so many reasons. I love how the metaphors dance here, just like we do with our hearts.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, Jenn...

j.

[Solar]

In a sentence, an exclamation of delight - speechless.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Solar.
j.

[Jimmy Yetts]

What's grammatical conjunctivitis sound like?
An excellent, rather intricate, succession of apt metaphors.
Amazing work!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind review, Jimmy.
j.

[andrew mitchell]

a treat indeed. what a masterpiece of words expressed Jacob and yes of a high standard, another bench mark is set!!!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, andrew.

j.

[iand63]

"But the dangling participles nod their heads no". So many times my partner does this, gives me a fit of giggles every time. First thought when reading "boy this lunch meet would definitely be a Utuber". Language can be as confusing as it can clarity. Nice one J.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, ian...
j.

[softlyfall]

Grammar plucked from the head of Suess and expressed with Dickinsonian quip.
What a treat.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your very kind words....Emily is by far my favorite...

j.

[softlyfall]

Mine, too.
I dwell in possibility :)

[Fran Marie]

Brilliant write here, Jacob..witty words written wonderfully ..love this..

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, Fran Marie.

j.

[Chris]

loved THIS!! Straight up genius and fun.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, Chris.

j.