confessions of the man in the moment

confessions of the man in the moment

A Poem by jacob erin-cilberto

confessions of the man in the moment


forest green becomes
transparent, a black landscape
from split second moon



erin-cilberto
8/20/17

© 2017 jacob erin-cilberto


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For a minute, many people came together to see, gasp, and witness something so incredible no news station could manipulate and interpret it for ratings.

Posted 6 Years Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

6 Years Ago

yes, people do find reasons to come together, but unfortunately, not often enough.
thanks, Ti.. read more
The eclipse of the moon and body, mind and soul. Time to recharge and move forward..

Posted 6 Years Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

6 Years Ago

thank you, Tracey.

j.
We all have those moments of dark thoughts in our minds. Nice one Jacob.

Posted 6 Years Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

6 Years Ago

thank you for your understanding, Dale...

j.
Ah, an eclipse poem! Unfortunately here in South Florida, we barely saw anything. I understand it was cloudy in Carbondale. Did you see the eclipse? LydI**

Posted 6 Years Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

6 Years Ago

there were clouds in places....i sat in front of my house, looked straight up at it...and saw it in .. read more
Lydia Shutter

6 Years Ago

Glad you were able to experience it!
Much better than 5 Our Fathers and 5 Hail Marys along with kneeling.

Regards,
Al

Posted 6 Years Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

6 Years Ago

and that act of contrition .....:)

thanks, Al
When You live in the now, and surrender to its power, when Your mind travel through the limitless boundaries of the universe, meditating through the wonders, Your being is happy, and Your brain begin creating the world with new paintings or the same ones turning them into endless peaceful beauty...


Posted 6 Years Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

6 Years Ago

thank you for your words, Light...
j.
Words of the moment and tremendous use of them my friend.

Posted 6 Years Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

6 Years Ago

thank you, kind sir.
j.
It must be a heavely sight...a green scape turning transparent and then dark with an overhead moon orchestrating the transition, dominating the robust sun, for a change...

Posted 6 Years Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

6 Years Ago

it was amazing.....thank you, DIVYA

j.
We're all of the moment... aren't we?

A brilliant split second, jacob!

Posted 6 Years Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

6 Years Ago

thank you, em.--yes, we are.
j.
emmajoy

6 Years Ago

waving across the miles, happy to agree yet again.
All is transparent until all is dark like an eclipse, its just a question of where one wants to remain transparent or stay in the dark.

Posted 6 Years Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

6 Years Ago

very insightful, andrew...thank you.
j.

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jacob erin-cilberto
jacob erin-cilberto

Carbondale, IL



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Originally from Bronx, NY, I live in Carbondale, Illinois...teach English at a community college and have been writing and publishing poetry since 1970. I am here to read for inspiration from other po.. more..

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