Blizzard Beats

Blizzard Beats 

solid snow walls

frozen tundra of heart

expectations melded to ice dreams

heavy jacket exuberance

cannot cover the hurt

she is still snowing inside.

erin-cilberto

9/18/18

Reviews

[barleygirl]

Good reminder of why I've never moved to any northern clime! I'm just a wimp that can't take snow! *brrrr!* Love the way you entwine temperatures inside & out! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Margie....
j.

[Carolynn]

brrr... this is a very cold one, frost bitten to the core!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Carolynn.
j.

[DIVYA]

The last line just blows the reader away! Awesome and brilliant, Mr. Jacob!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, DIVYA...
j.

[DIVYA]

You are most welcome!

[Chris Shaw]

Whoa that's one Ice Queen being described here. The frost has certainly set in.

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, Chris.
some are hurt so often, this just happens, eventually.

[Jimmy Yetts]

Her cold heart is, apparently, an unbreachable fortress.
Maybe you should seek warmer hearts in warmer climates.
Compelling poem!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Jimmy.
j.