spelling bee
A Poem by
jacob erin-cilberto
spelling bee
love is a ten-letter
word
if pronounced
phonetically
as commitment
erin-cilberto
11/20/19
© 2019 jacob erin-cilberto
Reviews
So often, commitment meets a relatively quick disregard--despite the fact that no relationship can work without it, and commitment is what marriage vows are all about.
Perceptive little write, J!
Posted 4 Years Ago
4 Years Ago
thanks Jimmy....most definitely there needs to be the big "C" word or love is doomed from the start... read more thanks Jimmy....most definitely there needs to be the big "C" word or love is doomed from the start.
j.
Looks like it is also 8 reviews for 4 letters
Posted 4 Years Ago
Looks like it is also 8 reviews for 4 letters
4 Years Ago
ha ha, thanks, Dave,
j.
I’ll think again then :)
Nicely put, Jacob.
Posted 4 Years Ago
I’ll think again then :)
Nicely put, Jacob.
4 Years Ago
thank you, DIVYA...
appreciate you.
j.
4 Years Ago
You’re welcome always :)
Clever piece of brevity Jacob. Love certainly needs commitment. I am smiling at Lorry's response :)
Chris
Posted 4 Years Ago
Clever piece of brevity Jacob. Love certainly needs commitment. I am smiling at Lorry's response :)
Chris
4 Years Ago
thank you, Chris...and yes, Lorry is a trip isn't he?
j.
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nicely put, J. As St. Paul put it: "Love never fails . . . "
T
Posted 4 Years Ago
nicely put, J. As St. Paul put it: "Love never fails . . . "
T
4 Years Ago
thank you, T.
j.
They go hand in hand, don't they, Jacob? Symbiotic in all ways. There is no one without the other.
A clever little write. Nicely inventive.
Posted 4 Years Ago
They go hand in hand, don't they, Jacob? Symbiotic in all ways. There is no one without the other.
A clever little write. Nicely inventive.
4 Years Ago
thank you for your kind words, Doodley,
j.
I quite like luv as a spelling vary ant..... :)
Posted 4 Years Ago
I quite like luv as a spelling vary ant..... :)
4 Years Ago
thank you, Neville,
j.
This is wisdom, what do we say of hate?
Posted 4 Years Ago
This is wisdom, what do we say of hate?
4 Years Ago
have to think on that one....thank you, Cassie,
j.
Or an twelve letter word if given its medical journal name... Delusionitis...No known cure, often terminal.
Posted 4 Years Ago
Or an twelve letter word if given its medical journal name... Delusionitis...No known cure, often terminal.
4 Years Ago
i've died a few times, then,
:)
thank you, Lorry,
j.
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jacob erin-cilberto Carbondale, IL
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Originally from Bronx, NY, I live in Carbondale, Illinois...teach English at a community college and have been writing and publishing poetry since 1970. I am here to read for inspiration from other po..
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