my revision of you

my revision of you

plagiarize me, please

cause then i will steal your eyes

see how my poem reads

erin-cilberto

12/3/19

Reviews

[David Klay]

Your doing that "Jacob Thing" here. I enjoy reading you, it is amazing how you take a single thought and turn it into something so deep and meaningful. Great poem, Jacob.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, David,
j.

[DIVYA]

This is so romantic Jacob. The ultimate offering. Loved it.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, DIVYA,
j.

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Ahh beautiful just love it

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Julie.
j.