Blossoms

Blossoms

sunshine,

with Covid shadows,

obese transparency

temperature is rising

the House chilled with the fear

the China Room empty

reality has been dished out

the dilemma rallies

cover blown

the truth is in the masses

erin-cilberto

10/2/2020

Reviews

[Unspoken poet]

So very well said here, this is uniquely written

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you Kay-T....
j.

[Gee]

A reality check for the orange buffoon :)
But will be soon forgotten.
Good morning Jacob

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, he will.
thank you, Gee.
and Good morning back to you...
j.

[Chris Shaw]

That last line says it all. You've all got a chance to do something about it without the virus lifting a finger. Excellent work.

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Chris...absolutely...
we do...

[Dave]

Oh, oh, "It is a just hoax, it will disappear, it is and was all Chinas' fault. Please- only wear a mask if you want too, come. come and attend my rallies.
FINALLY, finally, he is getting his just desserts. Perhaps we'll all get really lucky?

Take care - Dave

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, Dave...
He might learn the hard way...
j.

[Dave]

ARE YOU SERIOUS?! I don't think he's capable of learning!
Take care - Dave

[jacob erin-cilberto]

No that was a tongue-in-cheek comment.

[Dave]

okay
Take it easy and be careful- Dave

[Ladysue]

this certainly is spot on. It started out strong and continued. that last two lines are so true, brilliant and extremely sad. Excellently written.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, Ladysue,
j.

[BlackRose]

Well written. Something that should NEVER have started. And most probably started by certain people of course as a majority know was and is more to ruin the economy. Do as thise may but we will bounce back as we always do. So sad that people had to pass away from that have already or will without control.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, so sad...all of it...thank you for your understanding review, BlackRose,
j.

[Betty Hermelee]

Actually one truth is in our dear "LEADER" testing positive for Covid and has diabetes and is obese...just hope he doesn't spread it to to his base (haha!) "The cover is blown"....the masses are FREE!! His inner circle is "chilled with fear!!" Even the sun is exposed!!! Great write, however I interpreted it!!!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

astute interpretation, my friend...thank you for your words...

j.