Seen in the Heart

Seen in the Heart

A Poem by jacob erin-cilberto

Seen in the Heart

 

 

froze in ghost posture

your eyes looked through my shadow

love bloomed transparent

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

11/14/21

© 2021 jacob erin-cilberto


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A most beautiful Haiku my friend. I do love reading this form, Jacob, especially when it is well written and this is definitely well written. Your words say it all. Have a wonderful Wednesday....Mike.

Posted 1 Week Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

1 Week Ago

that is kind of you, Mike...
thank you,
j.
shadrach hah

1 Week Ago

Hi Jacob, love the Haiku. Have a wonderful Wednesday....Mike.
Wow, such a wonderful write here it is clever and creative in thought

Posted 1 Week Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

1 Week Ago

thank you for your kind words, Alex,
j.
I can NEVER and I always said it write something profound in just few lines!!! yesterday I told Richard on his beautiful Senryu here the same,
https://www.writerscafe.org/writing/RichardJ/2795459/

then noted that I think men are flexible in these forms more than a woman's talkative mind lol. what is touched and felt by heart is seen in the higher being, like the first intense insane knowing gaze that happens when we fell in love, the hearts see and know each others through it...

Posted 1 Week Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

1 Week Ago

I appreciate you, lightsong,
thank you for your kind review,
j.
They say love is blind. And some choose not to see blinded by their own importance.

Posted 1 Week Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

1 Week Ago

ain't that the truth! thank you, andrew,
j.
That first line rocks. I just hate that love is often rendered transparent (((HUGS)))

Posted 1 Week Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

1 Week Ago

sometimes those we love just cannot even see us.
We are just part of the scenery to them.
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I love this, very clever and I can’t write these if my life depended it on, what a wonderful skill you have for it.

Posted 1 Week Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

1 Week Ago

I bet if you tried you would write them just fine...thank you for your kind words, Patricia,
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Patricia

1 Week Ago

You’re welcome;)
That's all it takes, a glance. You can't hide love. What you feel in the heart, can be seen in the eyes. Really nice. This one played out visually for me.

Chris

Posted 1 Week Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

1 Week Ago

thank you, Chris...I was afraid it was a bit too long...
good morning from this side of the o.. read more
Chris Shaw

1 Week Ago

Good morning J. Have a good one. Beautiful day, blue sky and a flurry of gold leaf coins over here. .. read more
There are many qho cannot hide when they love so eone even if they think they are but everyone sees it.

Posted 1 Week Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

1 Week Ago

thank you for your insightful words, Cowboy...
j.

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jacob erin-cilberto
jacob erin-cilberto

Carbondale, IL



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Originally from Bronx, NY, I live in Carbondale, Illinois...teach English at a community college and have been writing and publishing poetry since 1970. I am here to read for inspiration from other po.. more..

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