Seen in the Heart

Seen in the Heart

 

 

froze in ghost posture

your eyes looked through my shadow

love bloomed transparent

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

11/14/21

Reviews

[shadrach hah]

A most beautiful Haiku my friend. I do love reading this form, Jacob, especially when it is well written and this is definitely well written. Your words say it all. Have a wonderful Wednesday....Mike.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

that is kind of you, Mike...
thank you,
j.

[shadrach hah]

Hi Jacob, love the Haiku. Have a wonderful Wednesday....Mike.

[lessa (kenzie)]

Wow, such a wonderful write here it is clever and creative in thought

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, Alex,
j.

[lightsong]

I can NEVER and I always said it write something profound in just few lines!!! yesterday I told Richard on his beautiful Senryu here the same,
https://www.writerscafe.org/writing/RichardJ/2795459/

then noted that I think men are flexible in these forms more than a woman's talkative mind lol. what is touched and felt by heart is seen in the higher being, like the first intense insane knowing gaze that happens when we fell in love, the hearts see and know each others through it...

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I appreciate you, lightsong,
thank you for your kind review,
j.

[andrew mitchell]

They say love is blind. And some choose not to see blinded by their own importance.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

ain't that the truth! thank you, andrew,
j.

[barleygirl]

That first line rocks. I just hate that love is often rendered transparent (((HUGS)))

[jacob erin-cilberto]

sometimes those we love just cannot even see us.
We are just part of the scenery to them.
read moresometimes those we love just cannot even see us.
We are just part of the scenery to them.
Thank you, my friend,
j.

[Patricia]

I love this, very clever and I can’t write these if my life depended it on, what a wonderful skill you have for it.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I bet if you tried you would write them just fine...thank you for your kind words, Patricia,
j.

[Patricia]

You’re welcome;)

[Chris Shaw]

That's all it takes, a glance. You can't hide love. What you feel in the heart, can be seen in the eyes. Really nice. This one played out visually for me.

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Chris...I was afraid it was a bit too long...
good morning from this side of the ocean.
j.

[Chris Shaw]

Good morning J. Have a good one. Beautiful day, blue sky and a flurry of gold leaf coins over here. So lovely.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

There are many qho cannot hide when they love so eone even if they think they are but everyone sees it.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your insightful words, Cowboy...
j.