I don't write love poems too good

I don't write love poems too good

here is one,

the moon falls and rises

and .....

oh my God, it's gone

well, there is still how the sun rises with your smile

and I am mesmerized by your...

oh my God, it's gone

I imagine how sure I am of your forever promise

to love me until 

I ....

oh my God, where did you go?

here is one,

the moon....

gone

I scream I love you over the mountain

then it crumbles

an avalanche of freezing spite

I am buried in lonely

oh my God, that is not a line of love

I am fishing for something now,

your beauty is to me, like...

I cannot remember what you look like now

smile, this has all been a ruse

my muse

don't write love poems so good.

erin-cilberto

6/10/22

Reviews

[lightsong]

You are really an exceptional extraordinary poet! sometimes I am amzed by your smart talent! IF this is NOT a real genuine LOVE poem, then WHAT? this is far better than countless other love poem. Original, creative, says it ALL in a simple, powerful, effective and WHOLE way! surely 1000000... of 100! what a diamond 💎

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, lightsong...this is about the best I can do.
j.

[lightsong]

Lol! your best is the bestest of the bests!