relief

relief

 

 

 

the pencil sketches

insides turned out

then the lead leads me to

relief

 

were you more beautiful 

in watercolors

or was my heart color blind?

 

now in gray

you look like i remember

 

a sharpened irony

since

i never saw you before

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

12/10/22

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

Oh yes, time makes a difference. Brings perspective. You can see a situation or a person in a new light. Or maybe their true colours. Love the title my friend. A great piece of writing. Have a lovely day and thanks for the music:)

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Chris...glad you are enjoying the music.
it has been the soundtrack of my life.read morethank you, Chris...glad you are enjoying the music.
it has been the soundtrack of my life.
j.

[Coyote Poetry]

Time make all thing easier. Darkness can become lighter. I liked the flow of thoughts Jacob. A amazing ending to the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, Coyote,
j.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Jacob.