at the old poets' clinic

at the old poets' clinic

 

 

there is a thought out in the waiting room

reading National Geographic

thinking how dull is non-fiction

 

when there is love to write about

and peace

and friendship

 

and love

and love

 

and then the voice over the intercom

breaks the silent train's track

 

"the poet will see you now"---

 

 

erin-cilberto

4/22/23

Reviews

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Wow this is thought provoking
Really different
Love it

My Fave lines

“when there is love to write about
and peace
and friendship

and love
and love”

[jacob erin-cilberto]

and love...there is not enough in this world...whatever happened to the peace movement?
thank you, Julie,
j.

[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

Yes I agree
Take care

[Keagen Cole]

one word: beautiful. ^w^

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, Keagen,
j.

[Keagen Cole]

Anytime, Jacob. ;3

[Silmara McGarry]

Absolutely beautiful!!! So different and captivating 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻I truly loved the end, I did not expect and that is what it makes so special also.
A very well done from dear Jacob and I hope all is great with you 😊

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Silmara...good to see you again, hope all is well with you,
j.

[Patricia Wedel]

Old Poets never die…. They just “Pen” away…
waiting rooms are inspirational … softly, Pat

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Pat,
j.

[John the Baptist]

And hopefully that poet won't be Bukowski.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

oh, I would hope not.
thank you, John,
j.

[The_Ancient_Rock]

I like that one...

Good poem.

;)

The poet will see you indeed. lol

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Ancient.
j.

[The_Ancient_Rock]

You are welcome.

[Cherrie]

Hang on while I gather up my notes and thesaurus.

[Cherrie]

Ya know I've been waiting here over an hour.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Oh, Geez.....the poet will finally see you now, Cherrie...sorry for the wait.
j.

[Wardah]

This really sparks the imagination about what’s going on at that clinic, who the poet is, what the thought is,… and it’s funny at the same time

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, Wardah,
j.

[emmajoygreen]

I just.. .. laughed, jacob! Many thank yous, 'must be ar that clinic right this moment! Odd how a few words can alter a moment or few in life. Adventure is a great thing!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, they surely can,
thank you, em,
j.

[emmajoygreen]

Hope all's well in your world, sir.

[Ana B.]

This hit full force! Amazing and thoughtfull ….especially with those unspoken thoughts…brilliant piece dear Jacob.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, Ana B.
nice to see you around again...you are missed when you are not here.
j.

[Ana B.]

Thank you so much Jacob! I miss being around here...