moving south

moving south

 

 

woods cannot escape

elemental borderline

flames scurry across

 

 

erin-cilberto

6/7/23

Reviews

[Patricia Wedel]

Wow,.. a Haiku that is moving as we speak… our atmosphere is suffering with smoke inhaled. We are at the Mercy of Wind and Fire. Pat

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, the words moving like the flames in the wind.
thank you, Pat,
j.

[Betty Hermelee]

Yes those horrific fires in Canada are creating havoc for millions of us...this too shall pass, as soon as the winds shift....everyone in this pattern, stay safe! Stay indoors J.
Best, B

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, everyone needs to take such care.
thank you, B.
j.

[Betty Hermelee]

indeed, and this too shall pass.
Best, B

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Very well said or written
Stay safe

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, Julie....nothing here in Southern Illinois at the moment...but it could happen.
j.

[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

Yes anything is possible these days
The air is very bad there saw on news is that where you are

[W. Barrett Munn]

Below the title in parentheses: Oh Canada

Winston

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes.........

[duff]

I've been through multiple fires and close calls. The havoc is indescribable.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Absolutely ...I can only imagine.

[Lorry]

Saw pictures of the smog filled streets turning rust coloured last night on the news and am thankful I'm not trying to breathe through that. Hope everyone is safe and it gets under control soon.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Yes, so many are having awful breathing problems.
thanks, Lorry,
j.

[Red Brick Keshner]

Reminds me of the great bush fires and Elvis being loaned to us to drop extinguishing waters. The elements are principal!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Makes me feel relieved I do not live in NYC now...
but I feel for those who have suffered through this thick, ugly air.
j.

[Chris Shaw]

Those flames inflicting their damage, on the move. It must be terrifying J. All consuming.

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Chris,
j.