The Question

The Question

A Poem by ewest1220
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Was this poem meant to start...

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The Question

By: Ethan West


If I bring a word to tattered page

Will there be man to read my word?

To hear my sorrows and my rage

And love if I allow a third

I sit before this broken glass

A mirrored, broken, tattered dream

My love for life has made me last

Tis what I hoped, and what it seemed

But I must wonder in my heart

Was this poem meant to start?

© 2012 ewest1220


Author's Note

ewest1220
This one is more reflective than some of my other works. Hope you enjoy!
Any feedback is greatly appreciated!

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This is the most realistic poem I've read in a while.

"If I bring a word to tattered page
Will there be man to read my word?
To hear my sorrows and my rage
And love if I allow a third..."

Those are my most favorite lines of this poem (insert heart here)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ewest1220

8 Years Ago

Wow thanks! I'm really thrilled you're enjoying my work!



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I love this! Short, simple, yet sentimental. Very good.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ewest1220

8 Years Ago

Thanks!
That1Nerd23

8 Years Ago

Anytime. (:
Yes, it was meant to start!
That's my answer :p I loved it!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ewest1220

8 Years Ago

Yay! :D I'm glad thank you so much for reading Michele!
Crimson Bayonet

8 Years Ago

You're welcome! :)
Okay.... Let me put it this way. My favorite part was the whole thing. I loved this. It flowed brilliantly, and in answer to the final line: yes.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ewest1220

8 Years Ago

Wow thanks! I'm really thrilled you enjoyed my work!
It sure as hell was meant to start, to be continued and completed, to be read and appreciated. We have a voice to let it be heard, and a hand that can hold a pen - or type - is meant to write. Never hold back as much as one word, it would be a waste.
The point is to ban the emotions on paper, to turn it into something... more. Lasting.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ewest1220

8 Years Ago

Well said my friend well said.
This is the most realistic poem I've read in a while.

"If I bring a word to tattered page
Will there be man to read my word?
To hear my sorrows and my rage
And love if I allow a third..."

Those are my most favorite lines of this poem (insert heart here)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ewest1220

8 Years Ago

Wow thanks! I'm really thrilled you're enjoying my work!
"If I bring a word to tattered page
Will there be man to read my word?" maybe, or maybe not. But a woman has and she greatly enjoyed your words. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ewest1220

8 Years Ago

Very well put :) Thank you so much it's always a pleasure to hear from you Laura!
Laura

8 Years Ago

Thanks :)
That is how I feel with all of my work! I have never wrote something and had been confident someone woUld read it, and want to have read it.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ewest1220

8 Years Ago

Same here :) However this site seems to have a way of proving me wrong. I'm glad you liked it than.. read more
I loved this poem! Written great, flowed well, and I know how you feel there. So this was an awesome poem! It's even better

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

David the writer

8 Years Ago

srry let me finish that, for me because "I know how you feel there.".
ewest1220

8 Years Ago

lol well hey I'm really glad you liked it! Thank you so much for reading!
David the writer

8 Years Ago

Once again thank you for supporting this writing to our community
this is so cool!!!!!!!
I loved how every other sentence rhymed with its pair and how you ended it with that question.
This is a priceless piece of art ma friend :D

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ewest1220

8 Years Ago

Wow thanks! I love hearing your feedback on my work my friend thank you so much for reading!
very well done...but since it involves a broken mirror i would thus invoke the number 7 and make a further six poem sequels to it

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ewest1220

9 Years Ago

lol interesting view my friend. I'm glad you liked it!
gombeggar

9 Years Ago

very welcome

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Tags: Poem, Dark, Reflective, Thoughtful

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Columbia Falls, MT



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