Inane Humans

Observation

Moving, across the sky
at speeds that would have made our ancestors,
who once lived in caves, cower in fear
instead,
we put on earphones
to better hear the inane in-flight movie
and ignore being in the midst of clouds, so bright, they sear.

Reviews

[Adam Adams]

That's what writers are 'bout!
U knw wht, today, being in modernism, it seems like being lost in d belivrmodernismve things. Youth have spoiled things around ev'n d essence of their own customs, no matter what. The poetry that u're quite bled in is what reflecting the truism of ur inner poet hidden deep at d bottom of ur very spirit...

... people enjoy phones but writers might be bewitched with just a piece of paper & pen. However, i belive tec. has already ruined things around but it has blessed the world with creativity as well so in a sense, it all depends what ... what thinking one is seemed to be bewildered around. Very creative thoughts u leave in few simplistic words. Brilliant. Looking forward to reading u!

[Barbara Walker]

Thank you,Adams!

[Willard Wells]

We do many things, which if considered are not really things that make sense. I mean really a thousand plus pound plan floating on air. I think not. What fools we be.

Very fun write and it makes you think.

[Barbara Walker]

Thank you for the review!

[Ashira Macy]

It really is amazing how much we take for granted nowadays. Beautifully illustrated.

[Andrew N. Farrens]

I only wish there was more to this......

[Craig2591]

So true. Couldn't have said it better myself.

[Legion]

Excellent point on our lack of awe due to familiarity and its indifference. Short but bittersweet.

[Coyote Poetry]

New world. Less noise and conversations. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry. Always good to read your words.
Coyote

[Einstein Noodle]

very astute ... and aint it the truth! the ear plugs and blinders go on all over the place ... making us neither a recorder nor a participant in the glories surrounding each of us :(
E.