ENGRAVED IN ME

Everytime I throw you out

Leave you and go far behind

I hide in all the weird places 

You find me and act so kind...


The valentines and birthdays

The happy and stressful days

Everytime I find myself in trouble

You are there, through my struggle...


As always you have come back

Now we are back to square one

I dont know why or how you do it

Surprising, how we get back together...


I push you away time and again

But you are a stubborn creature

You find a way straight to my heart

How is it that I could still stay away...


When you are there all around

Yelling your devotion and loyalty

I found you again embedded in my

Thoughts, dreams and deep in my heart............

Reviews

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Wow! Romantic. It's not only for Valentine's day but anytime because love is all around us every moment with someone special embedded in our heart and soul.

[Cerise]

Thank you for ur review...:)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

I love the title.
I love the rhyming.
I love the emotion.
I love the whole story line.
I loved the poem.
Really, beautiful, deep, romantic, and sweet.
What a wonderful tale of true love, he seems like a great guy to.
Wonderful write!

[Cerise]

Thank you soooo mch for the wonderful review

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Anytime :)

[Neon]

Ps.
The love`s always found in hearts, no matter what. No matter how painful or regretful it may have seen, we all love being loved withing its pastel-hues. Love`s, you know.. kinda intriguing thing which helps each `n every spirit roaming ov`r the empty road, for no particular reason. It`s a mountain, a cliff, a fog, a mist, an echo, a whisper.. a wind that makes the heart glowing more `n more at first. And, by the end, whatever it gives us all takes back, for no reason, but every season. So, in nutshell, we ain`t learn what loves teach us, cause, if we get taught by it, even the life`d start laughing at heart-aches. Not exactly. Lol

Nice poetry. Keep it up!

[Cerise]

woooooow....speechless.

[Neon]

Sounds good to know.

[Neon]

"I push you away time and again
But you are a stubborn creature
You find a way straight to my heart... "

These sexy lines are as horny as the boiled heart-beat of your raged flesh.

What.. huh? Don`t give me that look! I know, I`m saying sorry! Lol

Anyway -
Very nice poetry. I kinda love the way you cracked such deep insights of yous in words. Every new latest work of yous gives your lovers a new breath to have dance within you wings... which`s way enough to make you smiley. Liked this poetry.

By the way, yeah.. I love being Stubborn creature. Whoa. So, can I eat you? Hush.. I`m kidding. I`d, of course, Goddamn EAT ya! (smile)

Keep writing!
One of my fav. writes!

[Cerise]

hehehhehehe.....Thank you for taking time to review...:)

[Jamestown]

Might want to hold this one tight, so many times we push love away
and wish we had it later, regret sucks! I have a piece that speaks of this very
thing called yin@yang you might enjoy the read,thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Cerise]

Awww...thank you soooo much for such a wonderful review...i agree with u regret sucks..but destiny plays far too many games...it just get a tad bit difficult to keep something that isnt exactly urs...and i shall stop blabbering.. i will read urs..:)

[Jennie Baron]

Very appropriate for Valentine's time! I like the image of an enduring love that survives even if it means separating and getting back together many times. I love your diction/word choice in expressing your point. Nice indeed.

[Cerise]

Thank you for taking time to review...:)

[TPK Stories]

Love how you still find your way back...great write...

[Cerise]

Thank you for taking time to review...:)

[Leslie Philibert]

A poet I like....fine job

[Cerise]

Thank you for taking time to review...:)

[Saddam]

Everytime I find myself in trouble
You are there, through my struggle...

Wonderful write with hard ways.
But beautifully write.I like its flow and intensity.
Great read.

[Cerise]

Thank you for taking time to review...:)

[Rachelle]

A rare find. Clasp this one to you and return the devotion.

[Cerise]

Thank you for taking time to review...:)