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lost and found

lost and found

A Poem by Jane Doe

A strand of hair trying to find their place,

an eyelash trying not to fall out of the eye,

movie trying not to fall off the shelf,

a bug in the middle of a hurricane trying not to fall off a leaf,

a person trying to fit in to the crowd not stand out,

all i am saying is every one is lost and confused every once in a while so try to help them don't sit there your not helpless you know.

© 2009 Jane Doe


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This is an Awesome expressive piece. Nice write

Posted 9 Years Ago


Cute
eye lash falling out of eyelid
a movie that shouldnt be on the shelf needs to be given a dust
bugs being washed away by rain fall
feels like a hurrican to a bug hanging on a leaf

Posted 9 Years Ago


Some fine wisdom, so deep for an 8 year old to write such a poem, way beyond that age...marvellous and WOW!!!!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yes, yes and oh yes. I can't stand a pity party. You have shown in your words that there is always a way no matter how difficult the task! :D

Posted 12 Years Ago


Good visuals of what Lost really looks like, and good moral at the end.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on June 13, 2009

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